November 19, 1608
Dear Queen Elizabeth,
Your Majesty, sure you would want to know what is happening
here in Jamestown as you financed it. I have very pivotal information for you; I wanted to tell you about
our journey coming here to Jamestown. First of all I would like you to know
that we are the first permanent settlers in Jamestown, we all want riches but
there was a big problem.
Finding an imperative solution is what we needed Mam. A guy named John Smith
had an idea. “He who does not work does not eat”. We paid for our slaves so
they could work for us. They are making all of us to look for food gingerly. We
all hope we could find some food everyday so we could eat.
A very important person is John Rolfe; he started and
encouraged the first cash crop, the tobacco. The House of Burgesses was the
first example of a representative government. One of the representatives was Burges;
he didn’t have things planned and was very spontaneous. He always had a sour disposition and getting
worried for small problems. A lot of people thought he was very guile even my self, but
the way the Jamestown colony has improved I don’t think that anymore. This is
what happened in Jamestown since we settled here, please send me a response as
soon as possible.
George
I like your story, it has facts and things that did happen in history. You should put more stuff in though, it seems as if it's missing something. Also you forgot to say something else at the end besides george. For example: With respect, George or something
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